Patrick,
Technically very good. The model and costumes look great. But I didn't get a retro feel. Maybe I expected more dramatic lighting. More like the old Hollywood style black and white. High key lighting? Low key? There are different definitions. I'm taking a course this summer called Dramatic Hollywood style lighting so I hope to learn this particular skill. Good luck to you.

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